Frenzyisms
Okay, kids, so this is a section for my Script Frenzy typos. Some of them are hysterical, and some...maybe not so much. Enjoy!
She looks a little nervous, but starts to loop the rope around the ring attacked to the mast.
Yup, the ring is attacking the mast. As you've probably guessed, it should be attached instead.
"I'll find some spare road that you can use for practicing."
This one does sort of make sense if you don't know the context. Chip is teaching Annabelle how to tie a special knot, and he's supposed to be finding her a rope for practicing. Yeah, like the girl's just gonna go around tieing roads into knots. What are you thinking???
Croks is druk and starts acting rowdly l- gibbs, wu, and tubbs subdue hm eventualy.
This was just a quick note to myself on what should happen next when I had to leave the computer for a while. It was written really fast, so has lots of typos! It should read, "Crooks is drunk and starts acting rowdy - Gibbs, Wu, and Tubbs subdue him eventually."
A ladder leads down from the main deck into a small area surrounded by piles of quotes.
Yeah, these pirates just happen to carry piles of quotes in the hold.
"Eh? Aw, proabably just rats. They're everyone on this stinking ship you know."
Every one of the pirates on board is secretly a rat. Really. (Yeah, it should be everywhere.)
I guess I'll be leaving now hen.
Random chicken alert, cluck! (Should be then.)
She slipas his shoulder a bit harder.
This is one of my favorites. Slapping a shoulder can't feel very good, but "slipaing" sounds very painful. If she does that to the captain again, she's going to be in trouble.
Annabelle shurgas.
Similar to the last one. What exactly is "shurgaing?" I think you're supposed to be shrugging, lass. I keep feeling that shuga is an actual word, but I can't seem to remember what it is. Hmm...
He runs toward the gap between the ships, but is cut off by another man with a pistol is his hand.
Yikes! Now instead of peglegs, we've got pistolhands!
His desk chair has been pulled over, and he sits beside the cot holding one of her wide hands.
Did you know that getting shot in the shoulder causes your hands to get wider? No? Neither did I. Personally, I think it would more likely to make them white.
We now have a good supply of gold bars, expensive cloth, spices, and more food to add to our stories. Because you know every story can be inproved with the addition of gold bars, expensive cloth, spices, and food. (That should be stores, people.)
That's all for now, folks!
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